Storybuilding Narrative Audit

A verdict on your story, with the evidence attached

The free Scan tells you something is wrong and roughly where. The Narrative Audit is the one that tells you what to do about it, quoting each page.

CHF 2’500.
Credited in full against the Narrative Charter if the verdict is that your story needs rebuilding.

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Reading a company's story against the evidence

What you get

A written report, and a live session where we walk you through it and you argue with it.

The written analysis

Your story read across Recognition, Perception and Projection — what your audience can recognise, what they make of it, and whether they can picture themselves in it. Human judgment on deep evidence, quoted back with receipts rather than asserted.

The verdict

A formal call on whether your story should be sharpened or rebuilt. The Audit is the only thing we do that is allowed to use the word — the free Scan gives you a reading, and says so.

The homepage rewrite

Your story written at three altitudes, with the tagline read and the category claim examined. Not suggestions. The actual words, so you can see the difference rather than imagine it.

The channel roadmap

What your other channels — LinkedIn, your blog, your videos, wherever you publish — are doing to the story. Engagement is read as evidence, not as a scoreboard: a post that travelled tells you something about the story, not about the post.

How the machines retell you

A scored answer to whether the engines your buyers now ask first retell the right story about you, with the fixes attached.

SEO tools measure visibility. The Audit measures the story.

The verdict, and the two roads out of it

Most diagnostic work ends with a document and a handshake. This one ends with a decision that has somewhere to go, whichever way it falls.

If the story holds

Sharpen it

The story is right and the telling has drifted. The rewrite and the roadmap are the work — you take them and use them, and there is nothing further to buy unless you want help keeping it true as you publish.

If the story has reached its ceiling

Rebuild it

Told perfectly, this story still would not win. The Narrative Audit then becomes the first phase of the Narrative Charter rather than a separate purchase, and the CHF 2’500 comes off the Charter price.

Which means the Narrative Audit cannot dead-end. Whichever way it falls, you leave with work you can act on, and a clear next step rather than a document.

What the Narrative Audit will not do

It will not change your story. It reads what you have, judges it, and perfects the telling of it — and if what you have is the wrong story, it says so plainly rather than polishing it.

Changing the story is the Charter, and it is a different kind of work: your team in the room, over weeks, until they own what comes out.

Knowing which of the two you need is what the Narrative Audit is for.

Telling the difference between two kinds of work

What it costs

CHF 2’500

A fixed price for a fixed deliverable — unlike the Charter, the Narrative Audit is the same piece of work whoever you are, so it carries one number and no conditions. If the verdict sends you to the Charter, the full CHF 2’500 is credited against it, so choosing the Narrative Audit first never costs you anything except the time it takes.

And if it does not work, you do not pay. That is not a figure of speech —it is written down.

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We will tell you whether the Audit is the right place to start. No pitch. No obligation.

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